Writing Exercises Proposal

[b]The Anti-Hero

[SIZE=3][/b]In honor of the Avengers movie coming out I thought something heroic might be in order, but decided to put a twist on it. So instead I chose the anti-hero. I will not force you to use the ‘classic’ anti-hero template, but allow you a wider choice of anti-hero. Create a anti-hero or use one of your old stock characters if they fit the bill, write a few scenes with them and post them.

One scene that introduces and sets the tone of your character. And one action scene.

Due the 30th, now go write![/SIZE]

Awesome! Here’s something on the “Internal Dialogue” prompt

DAMAGED GOODS

…She talks between sips of her soda.

“It’s just physical, it doesn’t MEAN anything” she is saying.
This doesn’t give me any comfort, since it’s been weeks, if not months, since we had anything that was “physical” in the sense she is talking about.
“You satisfy my head, and my heart, but my body has needs too. I’m just being honest.”

I’m wondering if the soda is a calculated prop, as it keeps drawing my attention to her mouth. Her lips.
I try (and fail) to not remember how moist and giving those lips are.

How they feel on my skin.

Deep breath, and I tell her, in the proscribed and proper fashion that I approve of, and appreciate her honesty. She nods with a smile, receiving the feedback in the ingrained ritual response, but we go “off script” pretty quickly. When I tell her that I have physical needs as well, she tells me with enthusiasm that I’m free to satisfy them as well, and that it won’t affect our relationship in the slightest. “If anything,” she chirps… a happy bird enthusiasm in her voice… “it’ll probably make our relationship stronger!”

I forget deep breaths.

The thoughts are arguing and pushing each other around, demanding that ‘they were here first’, and ‘stop cutting in line, you FUCK.’ and ‘youwannamakesomthingofitbub?’

I try to explain to her, voice wavering and flustered, and muchtoofast. Emotion short circuiting and breaking through the years reinforced instruction of interaction ritual, decades of Responsible Society Training and curriculum trampled underfoot, proscribed communication squashed and ruptured like eggs, that I do not want to have my physical needs met by ‘someone else’… I want to have them satisfied by her.

Soda sip.

Those beautiful lips.

How I wish they were drinking from me.

My rapid fire chain-fed divergence from the “proper and acceptable communication and response pattern” throws her momentarily. It takes actual thought on her part, and I can see the gears spinning behind her softly furrowed brow as she searches her index of trained and acceptable behaviors to positive communication results. The wave of conflicting possible responses passes over her face and she finally responds to this with a kindly, sad expression and tells me “I just don’t see you like that… that’s not who you are to me.”

Let there be more darkness.

Exceptional, nicely done Rantz. :slight_smile:

Sorry, been busy with stuff and getting ready for the convention. Should have posted sooner…

Thank you for the kind words Omra, will do my best to keep it coming!

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[FONT=Calibri]“You bastard!” My fists beat against his chest ineffectually, and he did not even attempt to stop me. Tears flowed blurring my vision but I could still see the pain and guilt in his face, I did not really hate him but I needed to hit something, anything or anyone. And he was closest, and the one who had made the decision that would send the man I loved off to die.

“You bastard!” I collapsed against him exhausted; he held me tenderly and attempted to apologize. I buried my face into his chest and screamed. Tears and snot stained his nice shirt as I screamed again and again, deep primal noises erupted from my now sore throat. Noises that frightened even me. Eventually the adrenaline faded and my voice gave out. He tried to comfort me but I shoved him away growling, and paced like a trapped animal.

“Susan please.” He pleaded.

I gave him a gesture that he did not need to know AmSLan to understand.

“It was necessary.”

My hands slid back into familiar patterns, returning back to how I had spoken for years before Stephan had repaired my hearing and voice box using his Nanites, a gift. A gift from a man I had once hated.

He sighed and shook his head, “No it is not what I or anyone else wanted, it is what we; needed.”

Anger infected my sign language; my usually gentle and graceful movement became crisp, loud and forceful.

“Yes, there is too a difference.”

My gestures started to waver and become shaky.

He shook his head, “No I am sorry, there is no other alternative.”

He watched my hands protest his decision.

“Alright there are other options, but none of them have the chance of success that he offers,” he pointed to the room holding my husband, “fate brought him to us 15 years ago. It is because of him that we survived the raids that used to plague this colony, it is because of him that the warring colonies joined together into one large thriving society.”

I did not want to hear reason, I paced and started to raise my hands to cover my ears. He grabbed my wrists to stop me and spoke calmly and clearly, “It is not mere coincidence that he crossed a continent and an ocean to come here,” he nodded toward theroom where my husband floated in a nutrient tank, “here of all the places he could have arrived. He showed up here. “

I looked warily around at the hallway we stood in. A hallway within an underground base we uncovered just a year ago, all this time it was right beneath our feet and wedid not know it. The council believed that this base was the reason Stephan’s programing brought him here, a part of him knew that a base was here.

He shook me, “I do not believe in coincidences Susan. He and this base are here for a reason, to give humanity a chance. To give us a chance Susan.”

“But at what cost?”

He closed his eyes and sighed heavily, “I, I am sor*”

I cut him off with a retort, [SIZE=3]“A man’s humanity, and possibly his life as well.”[/SIZE]

He let go of my wrists and tried to turn away.

“If we do this we are no better than the bastards that did this to him originally.”

He would not look at me so I was forced to use my voice again.

“You want me to use my gift to go inside my husband’s head and turn him back into that,” my voice choked with emotion, “that thing again.”
He took a breath and steeled himself, “That thing is the only hope for this society to survive,” his grey eyes locked on mine, “and restoring him to his former status is the only way he can possibly complete the mission we need him to run, and most importantly the only hope for his return.”

My eyes widened in shock, “You, you mean he volunteered for this?”

A corner of him mouth twitched in dry humor, “Of course, how didyou think we triggered his ‘state’ and got him down here and into the preparation chamber? Did you think I snuck up on himand used that ridiculously long ‘phrase’ to activate his phase one programming and make him cooperative? He would have crushed my larynx after hearing the first few words,” he rubbed his throat and grimaced at the thought, “he volunteered after I sat down and explainede verything to him.”

My eyes were drawn to the door of the preparation room, “Why did he not…?”

His voice was hesitant, “He knew this was going to be hard enough without a long drawn out goodbye and,” he cleared his throat, “he honestly believes he is coming back.”

I could not help but smile at that. It felt alien on my face after all the frowning and scowling I had done, I turned back to the councilman and stared athim. He looked a little hesitant and afraid, perhaps wondering if I was probing his mind. He saw the hint of a smile on my features and relaxed.

“He was so damned adamant about it I actually began to believe him…”

The smile gained strength, “I wonder if he really did, or hedid it to make your job of activating the programming easier?”

“Oh,” his confidence evaporated.

I looked back to the door, “I will do as you ask,” I shuddered and tried to rub snot and tears from my face, “but I will need time to get ready,” my jaw tightened and I closed my eyes, “I would like to be alone.”

“Ah, of course.” I heard his footsteps grow distant and then a heavy steel door close.

I do not know how long I stood there before opening my eyes again. Looking at the door I was reminded of the only other time I had gazed upon it, the time Stephan had lead me inside and. My hands slid up to caress the ears that now could hear the world around me; he had found this place and used a technology that had been developed for war and used it to heal; so long had my world been silent. And then suddenly I could…

When the world fell apart it had played many cruel tricks upon the survivors, mine was the loss of what had made me special. And the awakening of a gift that nearly drove me mad. I went from rock star to a mute, a silent freak that could hear nothing. Nothing except the unfettered, unwanted, and often cruel inner thoughts of those around me; whether I wanted them or not. Voices, voices I could not silence, and the alltoo often ugly emotions that went with them.

“Aaargh,” my palm slammed against my forehead, “why am I? I need to get my head straight if I am to, oh God… Please God let my mind stop wandering and tormenting me with memories.” I slapped the door control and entered the dimly lit room; it was as cold as a talent agent’s soul inside and had a hospital smell to it. There in the illuminated tank floated the man I had grown to love, who had healed my broken spirit and had given the community I work and interact with hope and protection.

He looks so peaceful and yet I know that millions of nanites are rebuilding him, using the suspension of material in the tank to fortify bone, build muscle and modify his body in ways I do not wish to think about. Dear God he looks so different already, more like an action figure or video game avatar than the man I know. I had forgotten how unnatural heused to look… I jump back as electrodes stimulate new muscle tissue to tone it and prepare it for the work ahead, I want to touch him but dare not. The nanites would consider my hand resources and strip it down in seconds and useit to rebuild him nictitating membranes or something.

The image of my hand dissolving as if in acid is enough to prevent my impulse to touch him, I look over at the read outs, they show him as 81 percent completed and an estimated time to completion. I lay out a set of underwear and BDU’s and head over to the briefing room, I need to get ready for the work ahead. I sit at the table and find folders already there, they have intelligence on the gangs that prowl the wastelands are as along the dessert and outer frontiers and the warlord attempting to unite them into a force that could descend on our little alliance of cities like a plague of locusts. The walls are plastered with maps and surveillance photos, the council sure did their homework.

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My eyes fall upon a set of BDU’s in a locker that bared the style of night camouflage that had been en vogue back when this base would have been in operation some 20 years ago, and a shudder runs through me. That was what he had worn when the he had first arrived at the mall we had turned into a barely surviving fortified colony 15 years ago. It was like something from the old movies I had viewed before ‘the fall’, a lone man emerges through the smoke of battle and wipes out a ravaging gang of 30 plus men by himself. We were not sure whether to be thankful or afraid, was he a savior or a time bomb waiting to go off in our midst?

I had hated him back then. He reminded me of the stupid government that had sent off so many good people to die in stupid senseless wars, and he scared me. I hated him for that too. And yet I found him refreshing… His mind was silent, no running babbling inner dialog, and no sensation of leering, pity for my condition or worse yet disgust. It was nice to verbally spar with someone that I could not predict what he was going to say or do. And yet…

Chimes roused me from my thoughts, and the sound of pumps draining the tank in the room beside me.

Dear God this is really happening? Anger, fear and despair fight for dominance in my heart and mind. You bastard why are you doing this? And yet I already know the answer. That is his way, he is one of those men who believe in protecting what he loves, what he holds dearest. I hate him and love him for that, the selfless shit. I have to do this, it is what he wants. For me and those he was come to think of as his friends and family.

They gain a warrior and a protector and I lose the man I love. I strip him of all the things that make me love him and turn him into a soulless killing machine. No not completely soulless.

I rub my face and try to force back the tears I feel coming. He will still be in there, buried deep behind barriers and firewalls. Barriers that eventually will begin to fall like they had before, slowly revealing the mind and heart of the person he had been before the government did this to him. And then the memories will return both good and bad, and then the sense of loss. And eventually the horror of what he had done, as a government operative. The killing, interrogations and well, you fill in the blanks…

The sounds of stirring and moving of objects snap me from my distress. I bring out the briefing outline and attempt to slow my breathing; my heart feels like it is going to burst out of my chest. I must not appear scared or worried or he might perceive me as an enemy, I am not sure how much of his memory has been buried. Or how much of his old programming is active. I will not know that until I probe his mind.

The door unlocks and I freeze in place, and pretend to belooking down at an open folder with apparent interest. “Enter agent,” I utter with a neutral tone, “time for your briefing.”

I watch him move into the room with the grace and purpose of a jungle cat, his eyes moving about the room looking for potential threats. He stops behind the chair and gazes down at me with cold calculating eyes, as if categorizing me and judging if I am an ally or potential threat.

“Sit.” I say with as much authority as I can muster, thankfully my voice does not break under the strain.

He sits with smooth grace and no wasted motion. But does not relax, he sits with perfect balance ready to move at an instant in any direction should the need arise. I feel tired just looking at him.
And it hurts to look into eyes that used to hold so much passion,which used to caress me like a lover and gaze upon me with longing. And to find them now so bereft of life or personality, so alien, so absent of recognition. I want to shake him and plead with him to recognize me.

“Is something wrong sir?”

I tear my eyes from him and focus on the paper in front ofme, “No, you just look familiar. Sorry. Now then, what is your designation?”

“Combat Unit WR3, specializing in reconnaissance, infiltration and assassination. Codename: WARDOG.”

God I had hoped I would never hear that name again. I try and shut my emotions down and focus onthe paper, running through the formatted answers and questions. And using the established trigger phases tolower mental barriers that would allow me to enter different layers of his mind and throw the necessary switches to reroute thought patterns and open the flow from inert memory caps. The deeper we went the more I felt him slipping away from me, the more he became like a machine and less like a human, let alone the man I had slowly grown to love. The man I had rescued from being a killing machine and allowed to become an artist and poet again and the man who had rescued me from being a bitter and resentful woman to being a singer and musician again.

By the time we reached the final page of paperwork I felt dead inside, emotionally exhausted and used up. We went through the mission and I handed him the files and indicated the maps behind me, “Do you understand the objective?”

“Yes sir, conduct strikes against the gangs and leave behind evidence to suggest that rival gangs have conducted the strikes. Get the gangs to go to war against one another, and then finally infiltrate the Desert Heat Gang and assassinate their leader. Stoke the flames of war between the gangs and weaken them to the point they pose no threat to the Western Alliance, once the threat has been properly neutralized return to base and debrief.”

“Very good, familiarize yourself with the material presented and formulate a plan of action. Gather together any equipment you may need from the armory and motor pool and report to the council before leaving.” I stood up and left him alone in the briefing room. I allowed myself a last look through the one way mirror, it was like watching a stranger and yet… There was something familiar.

The scout vehicle stopped in front of the Council members and myself and Wardog got out and gave a presentation of his plan ofaction. The council seemed pleased with his scheme and gave him a warm sendoff and a hope that he returns safely and unharmed. He nodded curtly and thanked them for their concern, which caused a bit of a stir amongst them. Wardog never spoke unless asked a direct question or barking an order. Then in another twist as he turned to leave his eyes fell upon me, he paused oh so briefly and then he almost smirked in that coy little way I loved. But it quickly vanished like liquor at the Kennedy compound, and was replaced by a professional nod and playful tweak of his cap’s bill. I blinked in surprise and turned to see a cluster of concerned looks from the Council, they looked at me as if expecting reassurances from me that he is ok, I shrugged.

Did I do something wrong? While I pondered that something else began to tug at my senses, whistling. I followed the sound to the front seat of the scout vehicle; Wardog was whistling something while putting on his seatbelt. Drawn by the sound I approached and was greeted by a familiar sight, he pumped the gas pedal before starting the engine. Stephan used to do that, and that song where have I heard it before? The vehicle growled to life and as it pulledaway I finally remembered the song, ‘What do you do with a drunken Vulcan?’

A queer smile began to creep across my face as I watched the vehicle disappear into the distance.

“Dear God woman what have you done?” Asked a pudgy Councilman.

“Me? You are the ones sending him off to fight your battles for you!”

“But he was supposed to be the old Wardog we all remember from the days of old.” A greying Councilman pleaded.

“I put all of the old barriers up in place, and set everything up the way it used to be.”

“Then what happened?”

I smiled, “The only thing I can think of is that those barriers had been designed and erected for the mind of a twenty year old. He now has twice the memories and life experiences, they were not designed to restrain that much, Stephan is leaking through.”

Murmurs erupted among them, “Dear God.” “What have we done to him?” “Is this good or bad?”

“How long will they hold?”

I shook my head, “I don’t know.”

“Will this affect his ability to fight?”

I mentally refused to go there, so I ignored them and looked off to where I had last seen his vehicle. Eventually they gave up pestering me and wandered off to sulk and worry. Screw them, they caused this. Now they can worry about him too, though not for the same reasons as myself, but at least it gives me some grim satisfaction.

I guess I will be getting my Stephan back sooner than I thought. I just hope it is not at a time that is inconvenient or deadly for him.

Come back to me my love. Please. It is a cold and lonely place without you, as cold and uncaring as that underground base that robbed you of your humanity and years of your life.

You have sacrificed so much. You deserve a moments peace, come home and rest in my arms and let us heal each other’s hearts.


The website is still frakking up anyting I paste from WORD. It is a nightmare posting my stuff here. I spend a good hour editing my stuff afterwards.

Omra, very cool… nice “old school” feel to it, very classic and operatic, sweeping feel that makes you want to know “ok, what next?”

As a side-note, I have to ask, what are the “FSL Acheivements” in your sig?

Please see here. Sometimes the GWC crue does something called Fantasy Sci-fi. It’s sort of like Fantasy Sports, geek-style. We pick teams, create challenges, and write solutions. Check it out. I think you’ll like it. Omra is known for his verbose prowess.

And sometimes pictures speak louder than words :wink:

http://forum.galacticwatercooler.com/showthread.php?13806-FSL-3.0-challenge-4-No-Time-To-Panic&p=375184&viewfull=1#post375184

Yeah, what they said… And after each full round of FSL, awards are given out to certain GWC participants. I happened to win an award at each of them so far. Some awards are serious acknowledgments of the work done, others are rather tongue in cheek. Mine are a little of both…

Thanks for the answers, all… very cool indeed.

Here’s “Part I” of the “Anti-Hero” prompt. I’ll try and get part II (the action segment) done by the weekend…


BLOODY MARY

The first call of the night came in at 1:24 am, “waking” Mary.

She didn’t sleep in the truest sense of the word. No subconscious travelling or journeys taken with abandon along the paths of dreamtime worlds for Mary. But still, she required “rest”… recharging energy from the previous days expenditures. Her work was demanding, and if her battpacks were not at 100% when she began filling request calls, there were not enough carts of LU63 in the world to be able to “prop her up” and get her through a cycle’s deliveries, much less make sure she completed said deliveries alive.

The readout of the TranScreen chattered out the details of the first drop, characters and glyphs sequentially appearing, the programmed display behavior of the flexible projection film echoing the ancient teletypes Mary found to be both quaint and comforting. She slowly began to unfold her long limbs, lifting her head, allowing the twin lenses of her eyes correct for the low light, focusing on the information displayed on the other side of her stasis chamber, keeping the visual input data contained to ‘visible spectrum’. She filed the location, and her droidlocks disengaged from the input ports lining the interior walls of the chromium and glass cylinder. The release allowing her body to drift downward through the heavy luminous gel in the stasis chamber as she began to stand, a deadly flower opening in the night.

Some rumors spun that she was pure Cyber and Robo, no flesh or organic matter concealed under the sleek polysteel surface. Such tales held forth that her name was a derivation of her model number, M4R3, and that she was military grade and AWOL. Desperado ‘Bot that was too dangerous to attempt to take in with City Forces, no matter how elite and well-funded the Borough might be. Not valuable enough for the Military to commit to a Controlled Incursion into CitCorp jurisdiction. Those tales however, could never account for her appearance. Why would a Military Group… Government or Private… create a Battle Bot that looked like her? Military Cyber and Robo put function first, appearance second. If a thought was given towards the visual design at all, it was focused on intimidation… hulking mass and deafening noise, designed to inspire the sudden voiding of bowels and girl-like shrieks of terror… rarely humanoid, in either size or profile.

Mary was both… and distinctly female. When she made deliveries in the Undertown clubs, those vast echoing chambers of music, beats, and writhing bodies, men would see her from across the room and hone in on her like prey, thinking her ripe and luscious… halting their stalking approach when they neared close enough to realize there was no pliant flesh to be found here, no willing partner in the grind. Just Polysteel skin and limb. Droidlocks writhing and taking in data, digital medusa snakes providing 50 eyes in the back of her head. The tambourine ching-ching-ching as she walked from the heavy steel pull-rings lining the length of her arms and her legs. If any doubt still lay in the young hunter’s heart that this was Not Prey, the eyes… the eyes, they burned it away. The luminous iris changing color and hue depending on the scan Mary was taking, infrared, magnetic, visible… all fed with context overlays, conditional changes analyzed and displayed at the microsecond. All the better to see you with. All the better to make the delivery.

There were other rumors, said with less frequency, and in quiethushed tones when uttered at all that she was CartelWare. That she used to be human. A “mule” for the SouthLands Cartels. That she ran raw LU63, bound in flexfilm made of lead, deadly irradiated children slid into her womb to smuggle in the ConfedAm territories. That one time (that’s all is takes) the FlexFilm split. Cracked. Leaked. Her bloodstream swarming with the irradiated nanos.

The “Mule” rumor diverges in the telling at this point… some repeat the belief that the Nanos, free from the Instruction Sets and enhancement limiters they receive when they are processed into Cart form, proceeded to “re-make” Mary… replacing flesh with organic metal, nerve with circuit and fiber, until she became something… more than human. Something Evolved. The first child of Man and Machine.

The other possibility told is that the SouthLands Cartel refused to give up their best Mule, even in death. That disgraced and exiled doctors and cybermasters in the SouthLands remade her body, eaten apart by the LU63 from the inside, and engineered her to be even more efficient. Faster. More Agile. More calculating and cunning. Most importantly, capable of carrying eight times the amount of LU63 in Cart form within her body.

Nice. A cool CyberPunk feel to it IMHO. And I like the term droidlocks. Never heard that before…

The structures appeared as the bones of a giant skeleton poking out of the sand; blasted by sandstorms and bleached by the merciless desert sun they lacked much of their original shape or color. Much as the original occupants; they were, dying. Doomed to become reclaimed by the relentless desert and scrubbed from existence, in another 20 years and there would be no sign the town had ever been here.

It had probably been a nice little town once. But that was before ‘the fall’ and before the Sand Devil Gang had come upon it and made it their base of operations. It’s only real claim to fame had been the enormous agave plantation that fell just within its counties borders, and probably what had drawn the lowlifes to this local in the first place. Neglected and cannibalized a majority of the structures are dangerous teetering husks. Observation has shown that most of the original inhabitants are long since dead; it appears that a few of the staff at the garage have been treated well enough to survive this long. And the families of the four nearby farms are kept unmolested so long as they pay tribute with crops, kind of like a little fiefdom.
Security is a joke, a pair of old dilapidated police cars partially block the main road at either end of the town, and stop sticks are manned there to monitor traffic moving in and out of town. A few roof top sentries man the highest buildings but in the five days I have reconnoitered the town no patrols have made any sweeps. I guess they figure that their reputation and sheer numbers alone are enough to deter any would be invaders from making a move against them. Years of being unchallenged have made them lazy and overconfident. I will show them the error of their ways.

The only road they seem to monitor is the main highway which passes through town, they don’t even watch the town’s main arteries which connect it to its satellite businesses and housing tracts. They never expected someone to come around the long way and make the effort to climb the nearby hillside, huge mistake. And it surprised me even more to find the nearby hills unmanned as well, why would you not make use of the natural high ground and post lookouts on the hills? What a waste. I sure as Hell am making use of it.

And since no one even looks in this direction my approach toward the town will be unimpeded, hoo-fucking-rah!

A good attack is three quarters preparation, the stuff they never show you in the movies. Why because it is not glamorous, it is slow careful, often boring, dirty and tedious work.

For four nights I slipped into town unseen and planted my explosive devices, some were for distraction, others as lures to draw them closer for the true killing implements.

Littering is a nasty habit, and in this case… Deadly. Because it made it ridiculously easy to plant my IED’s all throughout the town, who is going to notice that an old propane tank has moved from one spot to another when there is so much debris and refuse strewn everywhere. Plus I gain a special bonus, all these old rusty metal nails and other discards make really nasty shrapnel for these IEDs.

I wonder if that crying Indian from those old anti littering commercials would consider this payback.

The propellant charge is just enough to lift the old discarded propane tanks 10 feet into the air, the now ignited accelerant I had previously sprayed onto the tanks gives them the little boost they need to heat the residual trapped vapors inside causing them to expand and distend the already compromised containers. They rupture and when the rapidly expanding gasses mix with the air and ignited incendiary gel the result is a ripple of airborne explosions that rock the adjoining trailer park.

Improvised air-fuel bombs…

I can’t help but smile at my handiwork… “Good morning scumbags, this is your wake up call.”

Over the next hour I slowly ramp up the tension, by setting off explosions around the outer edges of town. Sending them all off in different directions unsure where the enemy is and yet their numbers keep dropping with each trap I set. All the while I am right in the middle of them watching the whole thing from the roof of the Hotel, but they are unaware because I continually keep their focus on the perimeter where they believe the attacks are coming from.

Things continued to go surprisingly well until one of the less inebriated leaders realized that none of the lookouts on the roof I am currently occupying had answered their radios, nor have any of the men they had sent up here returned their inquiries. If the clanging of their motorcycle boots against the metal stairs was not enough to telegraph their arrival the idiots huffing and wheezing as they struggled to climb the stairs to the roof would have given them away. I set off the remaining charges and smile at the amount of dust and smoke it kicks up, plenty enough to help obscure me.

Then I stowed the detonator and sniper rifle, time for some wetwork.

It’s not a term I can take credit for, Jeff Noon has been using it since his novel “Vurt”. It also appears in the sequel Pollen, and the collection of short stories, Pixel Juice.

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Well I never got around to doing my action sequence. Been seriously slacking on my writing, need to break my slump.

Memory triggers Part One

Audio

There are three main elements that trigger memories, audio, smell and taste. This exercise will focus on audio. Music is the most common, but other sounds can spawn memories as well. The growl of an engine, the purr of a propeller driven aircraft, the sound of power tools in a garage, and so on… And how many couples do you know of that have ‘our song’? Where do you think that song came from? Probably because it was playing during a special moment during their relationship…

So your exercise this time around will be to think of certain bits of music, or sounds that cause you to wax nostalgic; or remember bits from your childhood. Or make you smile as they bring back happy memories from your past; or perhaps, not so pleasant memories. In either case write about it and share it with us.

This exercise can obviously be applied to your writing, your characters will have memory triggers as well, learning how to use them can be useful for ‘reveals’ about your characters past.

Have fun, now go write!

Let’s aim for the 6th as a deadline.